Tuesday, 1 December 2015

Quick Write Superhero

For our writing we did a quick write on a conversation between two people in a picture. Mine was about a superhero and a villain. We had to use these writing features below. Here is my writing.


  1. Use a very short sentence.
  2. Start your sentence with an AAWWUBBIS (Opener sentence)
  3. Ly start – Start a sentence with a ly adverb.
  4. Em – dash. A dash is used to set off information in a sentence with dramatic flair.
  5. Use speech punctuation
Super burpy face
As I ride on my candyfloss farting unicorn, I find Sir Poop-A-Lot. I tell Candyfart to land straight down. I walk up to Sir Poop-A-Lot. He introduces me to his dog, Sir Pee-A-Lot. I show him candyfart. After that introduction, I ask him why he had called for me.

“I want to kill you,” he tells me.
“Why?” I ask him.
“Don’t you remember all of my plans you have ruined. First the plan to steal the magic of the unicorn, then the plan to inject the country with evilness, last but not least you ruined my plan to help my mother steal the queen!” He reminded me. “I will kill you once and for all!” he screamed.

“No you won’t. Because I am killing you right now,” I told him. Carefully I put a bullet into his gun. ‘Bang!’ the gun shot at his heart. He fell to the floor - crumbling, pain, blood.
“Let’s go Candyfart. Our job is done,” I say.

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